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Post by marna on Jul 15, 2008 17:18:00 GMT -5
Lightning Bolt trotted. She would be running only the ground pulled at her hooves. "Ugh!" she didn't like it here, but she had to cross it to get.... well she didn't quite know where she was going. She stopped and panted. She had barely covered any ground, and she was tired. Her golden tresses and banner slightly billowed in the soft breeze. She welcomed the breeze that dried her sweaty sides. She heard a water fall and saw a patch of dry land. She trotted to it and looked at her muddy hooves. "Ugh," she wasn't extremely happy, but she welcomed the hard soil. She looked at the large marsh land and wondered why anyone liked it here. She decided to rest her sore limbs and lied down. She thought how she would get out of here and whether or not she would ever return home. Will I ever see my brother again? Then she started to miss her old home, her herd, her twin brother. Where was he? What was he doing? Well knowing him Lightning Bolt decided he was flirting with some girl. She wondered if he missed her as much as she missed him. Then she shocked herself. She did miss him! She missed the conniving, rude, annoyance that was her brother. She missed his long brown mane and his happy laugh. She loved his laugh, she pretty much loved everything about him. She remembered when they were born that she had almost died, if he hadn't convinced their mother to keep her she wouldn't be here right now. As she missed him she forgot about her surroundings and the snapping of a twig jolted her to her feet. "Who's there?" she demanded in a shaky voice.
Reason for Editing: Mother not other! XD
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Post by CHARL!E BROWN<<* on Jul 15, 2008 21:04:59 GMT -5
 x.Everyone needs a goal in life. Without a goal, life would be nothing. You would just be...living. Living a life of nothing. Just eating, sleeping and doing the same stuff everyday. Your goals could be either good or bad. Whichever way it made for you to succeed in life. So what's your goal? Mine, is to gain power. Why? Because I am a king of course, and kings, they need power. It's not like I am power hungry or anything, I just enjo beng in control. And no, I am not a control freak to who ever decides to confront me. And I am definetly someone you do not want to confront.
x.The large grey stallion covered the marsh-like lands easily as he cantered by everything. It was all a blur as he picked up speed. Black mane flew back behind him as the wind smashed into him from the other direction. His black socked legs crushed the land beneath him. The land was shaking beneath him. Titanic soon reached the beginning of the real marsh. The grey stallion stopped and sniffed the air. There was a mare close by. A mare that seemed distressed. Titanic quickly lifted up one black leg and stepped down. 'Crack'. His large black hoof landed upon a twig that was neatly lying there before he awoke it from its silent slumber. Body awarned, he looked around to see where the voice came from. The voice of a mare obviously, and she called to him. Maybe not on purpose, but the need to find her surroundings. Titanic looked out across the marshland and saw in the middle on a little island that was free from all the sticky like mud. The mare sounded demanding. Demanding? To him? Well, this may have been a first, but he must not forget that the mare had not seen him before. "I am here, Titanic. Sorry to have awaken you from your slumber..." Titanics handsome face looked out to the mare. The black blaze blended in clearly with his pure black forelock that covered his eyes. The sun burned onto his grey, black spotted rump. The stallion took steps forward, and his front daggers were into the mud. He quickly examined the mare, and payed no attention to the mud that his legs were supposedly stuck to. "I am the King of the land Sunken Lake. I am residing in the loner domains. And, pretty little fae, it seems almost like you have run off far from home." With a flick of his tail, the stallion lifted his front feet out of the mud, then walked out closer to where the mare was. It was quite the struggle sometimes, but Titanic made no show of it. After all, his lifetime goal was power.
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My first post with him. He is such a hottie <3
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Post by marna on Jul 16, 2008 11:39:37 GMT -5
"I have not run off sir," Lightning Bolt said to the handsome stud, "I simply wanted more than the simple herd life. I wanted adventure." Bolt looked over the stallion, this Titanic. "My name is Lightning Bolt." She took a few steps toward the stallion, submerging her front hooves in the mud. "You can call me bolt though." She walked up to him. "So you're a king, and of Sunken Lake? Well then." She made a low bow, getting mud in her nostrils. "Your Majesty," she used a some what rude tone.
[OOC: I like to use "some what" too much. Short post. Icky! XD]
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Post by CHARL!E BROWN<<* on Jul 16, 2008 11:44:47 GMT -5
TITANIC...
[/color] Oh no, this ship won't sink.[/size][/color][/center] x.I am the king. I am your god. I am your ruler. I am who you bow down to. But, not with rudeness. I can suspect her tone. She is maybe making fun of my rank? Well, she shouldn't. Oh, no she shouldn't, or she could be sent into my pits of hell. But no, I am no dark. But I am no light, let me remind you about that. I live on no standards. I live not to kill, or to love. I live to be me. Me, Titanic the large and handsome stallion that rules the amazing land of Sunken Lake. And now, this fae comes along and tells me what I should not hear? The information may be good for me, but her tone I do not like. After all, I have much more power than her. So bow down to me Lighting Bolt. Bow down.
x.The handsome grey stallion looked down to the mare. She looked agile, strong and definetly had a back bone. But he didn't like the tone of voice he heard from her lips. Is she mocking him? Well, she better not. Or she would be in trouble. "Well, Lightning Bolt. Your life seems like no adventure if you spend days lying here in the middle of no where." Titan looked at the mare with sharp eyes. This better teach her to not mess around with him. "And I am not deaf to your rude tone of voice. And to let you know, just because I am king means no reason to treat me special. We are all equines you know." His covered eyes narrowed at her. How he saw threw his bushy forelock was impossible to tell, but Titan had never shown his eyes. Why? Well, that is a secret of course... "And I would pick up your words again before you trip up on them again. I am no fool you know. No silly girls tricks shall work on me." His grey body stepped closer to the mare. There was something that he noticed before. Distress almost, and how come? It seemed as if she had a perfect life for the kind of mare she was. With a flick of his head, his eyes were still covered, but he looked down to the mare from where his head carried now. "Is anything wrong Bolt? Because you seem slightly distressed."
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He may be a jerk. But he is a hot jerk XD
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Post by marna on Jul 16, 2008 16:08:01 GMT -5
She jolted upright. "Distressed?" she said aloud. "You want to know what's wrong with me? I'll tell you," she paused a moment. "I have been treated like royalty all my life. I have had the most perfect life, and I hate it! I hate it all! I just want people to leave me alone! Not wait on me hand and foot!" she starred at where his eyes should be. "Let me tell you one thing, power is nothing without love." She turned and started to walk away. "Oh and by the way," she stopped and looked back at him, "striving for power is a stupid waste." She stomped away, through the mud.
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Post by CHARL!E BROWN<<* on Jul 16, 2008 16:24:23 GMT -5
TITANIC...
[/color] Oh no, this ship won't sink.[/size][/color][/center] x.This mare has a backbone, and let me say that this is good. My charcoal lips curl into a pleased smile. This mare is what I might be looking for in my herd. But obviously, she might be the more sensitive type to my words. But, almost any mare would be. I guess I could also become more nice or friendlier, but it is not in my nature to be 'kind' to an equine that I have just met. Can you blame me? Mother always said to never talk to stranger. My forelock shielded my eyes from the sun, that burned my black spotted rump. My odd colourings looked very handsome and unique in the sun if I may say so myself. I am pleased with myself entirely. So what if I am a jerk sometimes? It doesn't affect me, does it? My black legs took steps closer to the female. She was walking away. Oh no. No good. She can't just walk away from me! And no she won't. I picked up my speed and cantered past her as fast as I could through the sticky ground. I was panting now. A quick stop infront of her definetly got her attention. And my sleek lip curl came into play again.
"Oh dear Bolt. Are you telling me that I am striving for power? What if the power I am looking for is love? How would you know that? Of course you wouldn't. You barely know me." Titanic looked into her eyes with something that may have been sympathy. It was a good thing that his eyes were covered. He could have never let that one down. The words came out very sleek as he spoke them. They made sense after all. And they should knock some into her to where he was coming from. "And a royal eh? A very pretigious one then, to be followed around all the time. What were you? Queen of the darks? Princess of the lights? Or the neutrals? I can not judge you obviously, Bolt, since I know nothing of you. And by walking away, I will know nothing." Titanic lifted an eyebrow at the mare. His muzzle was lower now. Closer to her, as he spoke. He wanted the words to seep into her. To tell her that he wasn't all mean, but his words were sorta mean. The giant could be gentle, and he didn't want to pass as a monster. Or he might as well sleep in the pits of hell tonight.
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what can i say? i luv this guy <3
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Post by marna on Jul 16, 2008 16:38:36 GMT -5
Bolt looked quizzically at the stallion, "My past is my business and mine alone, but I will make yo this offer," she smirked at Titanic, "I'll tell you my lineage if you tell me why you hide your eyes. Now you don't have to tell me now, but if you don't ask me to join your herd, then you might never know." She had this stallion between a rock and a hard place. She wondered how he would react. If he would discard her or accept her. Either way she'd be happy.
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Post by CHARL!E BROWN<<* on Jul 16, 2008 17:00:37 GMT -5
TITANIC...
[/color] Oh no, this ship won't sink.[/size][/color][/center] x.Bolt was sneaky. Very sneaky. Trying to play mind games on me. I could not tell if it was working or not. Why? Well, obviously I had to think of some way out of this. But maybe. But maybe I could follow her commands, and I will get her to follow mine. And she forgot to specifically say when to say my secret. The chestnut mare was no match for me. Definetly not. I am a ruler. I am tough. I am made of metal for freakin' sake! If she did not like the way I played, well then she could rot in the pitts of h.ell. Yes, I said it. No one was to fool around with me. No, no, no. No one, either mare, stallion or foal was to fool around with me. No one could fool around with Titanic. And no one would be able to take my crown.
x.Light eluminated his black points around his body. The black legs that upheld his strong body were now brown from the mud. It was hard to walk through this, and he couldn't imagine one person that would want to live here, but then again, it became quite comfy after a while, but it turned all brown. A sticky brown that would be hard to take off. Titanic made a quick mental note to go swimming in the lake after he returned home with his new mare. And yes, I repeat. His new mare. "Fine then, Bolt. But you know what. I don't really need to learn about your past, right? So how about you just come home with me, and we can talk. You were right. Your past is your business and yours to keep. So I will be on my way then, if you decide to come with me, I will be in my home the Sunken Lake."
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ok, then if bolt decides to go home with Titanic, tell me and I will put her as a regular mare in his land.
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Post by marna on Jul 16, 2008 17:05:31 GMT -5
Bolt looked at the stallion. "I'll follow you," she said to him. Then she used her tongue as a whip, "But I knew you'd be too scared to tell me why. All though that is your business not mine." She would have fun being this stallions mare. She would enjoy it thoroughly.
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